Question for manga writing

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OPShredder

TitanTVMan said:

Explosions, fire swords, muscle cars, dragons, teeth being punched out of the mouth.

Nah that's too GENUINE cool
I'm talking 13yo edgelord pokemon trainer with eyes hidden under cap's shadow, and who thinks he will be able to kill Christ

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TitanTVMan

OPShredder said:

Nah that's too GENUINE cool
I'm talking 13yo edgelord pokemon trainer with eyes hidden under cap's shadow, and who thinks he will be able to kill Christ

All black clothing, wearing spiky collars, having a tail, animal ears and fangs whilst also being a human, red eye color, black eye color, heavy eye shadow, self harm scars, being a furfag, upside-down cross symbols, being the quiet kid at school.

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OPShredder

TitanTVMan said:

All black clothing, wearing spiky collars, having a tail, animal ears and fangs whilst also being a human, red eye color, black eye color, heavy eye shadow, self harm scars, being a furfag, upside-down cross symbols, being the quiet kid at school.

We're getting close, now trim the overly satanic stuff or else it will be too obvious for normalfags

So for now we have:

- 13yo pokemon trainer, ash ketchum's newest partner (it's the end of the franchise anyway)
- tries too hard to be cool (le fake-badass aura farmer whose sole trait is aura farming), gooner
- only listens to (the shitty stuff from) Linkin Park (In The End, Crawling, Numb (the jay z version) and The Emptiness Machine), It will first be a shitty AI slop render of what xe looks like because THERE'S NO WAY (yet) THAT I'M DRAWING SUCH A BRIMMY DESIGN MYSELF (for now at least)
- Black clothing with red accents, spiky collar, red eyes, black hair, self-harm scars (self-harm scars mdr )
- Thinks he's super tuff and shiieet but will be either overconfident or terrified when the main villain (self-insert warning) is here
- TINY (not non-existent but very shallow) character development (aka "if you ever look funny at my friends even once you're in for a world of hurt")
- Main Pokémon is Scrafty (main move is Baddy Bad because muh hecking epic smoke screen entrances o mishehu)
- Brainwashed into hating his parents (so heartbroken they had no choice but to disown him, they're still grieving about this), puts Ash Ketchum on a pedestal
- The main villain will first have disdain for that boy, but it will turn into hatred

More info when I come up with it

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